So here is my type video so far. I changed some things...its not done obviously. Give me some feedback and please spell check for me...i've been looking at it too long to notice some errors...
This looks really good! I think you have made a lot of great changes and its really interesting. You might want to include some of the same effects that you had at the beginning throughout.
This is a really great piece so far. I agree that some of the super clever transitions used in the beginning could be carried through to the last half. Can't wait to see the final!
I agree, you were really clever with a lot of your transitions in the beginning and it would be neat to see them carried throughout. Also, I don't understand why there is the gap between "to" and "others" on the "we cannot think of being acceptable to others..." part. The tone is great and I love the background music. Good job, can't wait to see it finished!
I like yours a lot, it flows really well. There might be too much of a pause in the beginning listening to the music, and maybe you could turn the music down a little bit but other than that you did a really good job.
Oh. I thought I left a comment already. I like the background music you added, and the timing is perfect at the beginning. Grabbed my attention right away. Only saw I thing: about 27 sec. in, in "We cannot think... acceptable... others"--"others" should probably align with the right of "think". That's it! I like the changes you made too!
Yeah, I'm 100% sure I typed this before because I mentioned that you did you super good job and deserve an A+! Where did it go?
Meh it's alright... I guess. Just kidding - it's looking pretty darn good. I agree with Allie about the weird gap. Also, I still think the intro is a bit long - sorry.
I think this looks great. It's clean, and it looks like everything is done with a purpose. The arrangement of type and the smalls and bigs all add so much to the piece. I would just carry that through when you are making the end and it will be awesome.
I think it looks great. I like the added music but agree that it could be turned down a little so it doesn't take away from the actual speech as much. Also agree with the gap between "to" and "others". Great ideas, can't wait to see it finished!
The way you transitioned the text was really nice. You have a very good range of transitions for the text so it deffinately keeps my attention! The background music may be a little loud i was hearing it a lot more than the actual speech.
It looks good, cant wait to see the final one. the timing with him tripping over his own words is done well. I wonder though why there is a big space between "to" and "others" when he talking about being acceptable.
well, like everyone else who has one of these things i am a graphics student...at ku. since you know that i will talk about what you might not know. i am a member of the university of kansas marching jayhawks. i play with the men's basketball band. i went to the orange bowl, and all rounds of the ncaa tournament with the basketball band, i saw mario's shot live. i am also a member of kappa kappa psi, the band fraternity (weird i know). basically along with graphics i love music. i find inspiration in it, doing it, playing it, marching to it, it gives me peace of mind. i play the tuba.
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I really like this still, and as far as I noticed...all of the words were spelled correctly. Can't wait to see it finished.
This looks really good! I think you have made a lot of great changes and its really interesting. You might want to include some of the same effects that you had at the beginning throughout.
This is a really great piece so far. I agree that some of the super clever transitions used in the beginning could be carried through to the last half. Can't wait to see the final!
I think you did well especially in ternms of expressing tone. I like yours. and I expect to see your finished motion.
I agree, you were really clever with a lot of your transitions in the beginning and it would be neat to see them carried throughout. Also, I don't understand why there is the gap between "to" and "others" on the "we cannot think of being acceptable to others..." part. The tone is great and I love the background music. Good job, can't wait to see it finished!
I like yours a lot, it flows really well. There might be too much of a pause in the beginning listening to the music, and maybe you could turn the music down a little bit but other than that you did a really good job.
Oh. I thought I left a comment already.
I like the background music you added, and the timing is perfect at the beginning. Grabbed my attention right away.
Only saw I thing: about 27 sec. in, in "We cannot think... acceptable... others"--"others" should probably align with the right of "think".
That's it! I like the changes you made too!
Yeah, I'm 100% sure I typed this before because I mentioned that you did you super good job and deserve an A+! Where did it go?
Meh it's alright... I guess. Just kidding - it's looking pretty darn good. I agree with Allie about the weird gap. Also, I still think the intro is a bit long - sorry.
I think this looks great. It's clean, and it looks like everything is done with a purpose. The arrangement of type and the smalls and bigs all add so much to the piece. I would just carry that through when you are making the end and it will be awesome.
I think it looks great. I like the added music but agree that it could be turned down a little so it doesn't take away from the actual speech as much. Also agree with the gap between "to" and "others". Great ideas, can't wait to see it finished!
The way you transitioned the text was really nice. You have a very good range of transitions for the text so it deffinately keeps my attention!
The background music may be a little loud i was hearing it a lot more than the actual speech.
Lovvee the music in your background!!! I also love all the movement going on. especially the acceptable part, that is awesome!
It looks good, cant wait to see the final one. the timing with him tripping over his own words is done well. I wonder though why there is a big space between "to" and "others" when he talking about being acceptable.
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